Comments on: WeWriWa/Snippet Sunday 01/05/2013 #8sunday #snippetsunday

By: Linda Hamonou

Linda Hamonou — Thu, 09 Jan 2014 04:52:01 +0000

Oh, why is he leaving them here?

By: Kate Warren

Kate Warren — Sun, 05 Jan 2014 23:07:46 +0000

He seems like a nice guy. I hope they meet again.

By: Eleri Stone

Eleri Stone — Sun, 05 Jan 2014 22:47:08 +0000

Aw, his concern for her is so touching.

By: Marcia

Marcia — Sun, 05 Jan 2014 20:58:31 +0000

This excerpt is very clear, and I really feel like I’m right there with them. I don’t know these characters but I’m really curious and a little worried about what’s going to happen next!

By: elainecsc2013

elainecsc2013 — Sun, 05 Jan 2014 19:59:16 +0000

Nice emotions here.

By: Millie Burns

Millie Burns — Sun, 05 Jan 2014 19:07:17 +0000

Are they parting ways???? Augh, not yet!

By: P.T. Wyant

P.T. Wyant — Sun, 05 Jan 2014 18:58:42 +0000

I really love the emotion in the first paragraph.

By: sueannbowlingauthor

sueannbowlingauthor — Sun, 05 Jan 2014 18:32:06 +0000

Is he leaving here here?

By: veronicascott

veronicascott — Sun, 05 Jan 2014 17:51:14 +0000

I like this story, I love all three characters and I feel so sad for him, that he can’t help her. Yet. I’m sure there will be Developments. Excellent excerpt!

By: Author Charmaine Gordon

Author Charmaine Gordon — Sun, 05 Jan 2014 17:44:08 +0000

Good emotional scene allowing the reader to feel for both of them.