Comments on: WeWriWa/Snippet Sunday 02/16/2014 #8sunday #snippetsunday

By: Pat Harris

Pat Harris — Mon, 17 Feb 2014 15:35:46 +0000

Wow, congratulations on the new job and on making it through clothing shopping. Love the description. Cool imagery. Liked the “suffocating blackness.” Write on!

By: veronicascott

veronicascott — Mon, 17 Feb 2014 03:58:16 +0000

LOVE these wolf doors. I could really visualize them and the description creates amazing atmosphere for the story. Terrific snippet!

By: Millie Burns

Millie Burns — Mon, 17 Feb 2014 00:01:48 +0000

I’m hoping the insides of the building end up being more calming…after she can breath again…and see again…

By: elainecsc2013

elainecsc2013 — Sun, 16 Feb 2014 22:42:10 +0000

Enjoyed the excerpt, and your cover is awesome.

By: Danielle Forrest

Danielle Forrest — Sun, 16 Feb 2014 22:25:49 +0000

In reply to P.T. Wyant. Thanks. I've been actively trying to do a better job describing the physical reactions to emotions.

By: Danielle Forrest

Danielle Forrest — Sun, 16 Feb 2014 22:24:30 +0000

In reply to Eleri Stone. Thanks. I love playing with words.

By: Danielle Forrest

Danielle Forrest — Sun, 16 Feb 2014 22:24:09 +0000

In reply to Karysa Faire. Yeah, I have a thing for hardware. Between my dad and I, you wouldn't believe the amount of shots we have of door hinges, door knobs, and various other bits of architecture, mainly old (like a few hundred years). I've been to Greece and Rome, and I imagine some of that sprouted from my experiences with some of the carved stone there.

By: Karysa Faire

Karysa Faire — Sun, 16 Feb 2014 21:21:36 +0000

Those doors sound amazing. Can I get a pair?

By: sueannbowlingauthor

sueannbowlingauthor — Sun, 16 Feb 2014 18:55:52 +0000

Beautiful description of the doors.

By: Eleri Stone

Eleri Stone — Sun, 16 Feb 2014 16:41:50 +0000

Loved “I half expected it to growl.” (And the sudden suffocating darkness too:)