Comments on: WeWriWa/Snippet Sunday 06/30/2013 #8sunday #snipsun

By: forrestdl@gmail.com

forrestdl@gmail.com — Tue, 02 Jul 2013 04:48:33 +0000

In reply to writerlysam. Thanks. This scene just sort of flew off my fingers when I wrote it. It seemed to me, there would be two things plaguing a mind in that situation -- getting to safety and what might be chasing, imagined or real. I loved that part too.

By: writerlysam

writerlysam — Tue, 02 Jul 2013 03:51:34 +0000

I like the descriptions of “armor” and “hooves” – great way to set the scene they’re running from.

By: forrestdl@gmail.com

forrestdl@gmail.com — Tue, 02 Jul 2013 03:03:39 +0000

In reply to DebE. Dun dun dun... Stay tuned.

By: DebE

DebE — Tue, 02 Jul 2013 02:24:27 +0000

Ooh, I hope they get away…

By: forrestdl@gmail.com

forrestdl@gmail.com — Mon, 01 Jul 2013 23:04:14 +0000

In reply to P.T. Wyant. Thanks. I love a tense piece.

By: Stevie Carroll

Stevie Carroll — Mon, 01 Jul 2013 21:08:32 +0000

Great tension there.

By: katewyland

katewyland — Mon, 01 Jul 2013 18:49:41 +0000

Ooh, exciting and tense. Nice job.

By: P.T. Wyant

P.T. Wyant — Mon, 01 Jul 2013 18:16:30 +0000

Excellent tension.

By: forrestdl@gmail.com

forrestdl@gmail.com — Mon, 01 Jul 2013 18:00:13 +0000

In reply to Linda Hamonou. Thanks.

By: Linda Hamonou

Linda Hamonou — Mon, 01 Jul 2013 11:03:25 +0000

I like how you described the silence.