Comments on: WeWriWa/Snippet Sunday 09/22/2013 #snippetsunday #8sunday

By: chellecordero

chellecordero — Tue, 24 Sep 2013 04:41:34 +0000

The boy is so precocious, love it!

By: burnsmillie

burnsmillie — Mon, 23 Sep 2013 04:37:15 +0000

The little boy is adorable! This is such a great eight! Oh, little typo with know…to no?

By: Chip

Chip — Sun, 22 Sep 2013 21:20:52 +0000

I like the way the kid sized up the knight.

By: P.T. Wyant

P.T. Wyant — Sun, 22 Sep 2013 21:18:02 +0000

So cute! I love the interplay of their characters.

By: Rayne Golay

Rayne Golay — Sun, 22 Sep 2013 20:36:10 +0000

I like the knight. His understanding of this child is endearing. And the boy’s wordless take on the knight, “You’ll do,” is very good. Although the snippet is short, there’s an atmosphere that attracts me.

By: Susan Stuckey

Susan Stuckey — Sun, 22 Sep 2013 15:32:49 +0000

Very nicely done interaction. Good understanding of children from a Knight AND the ending makes the reader wonder what task/chore etc the boy thinks the Knight will/can accomplish. Nicely done.

By: Marcia

Marcia — Sun, 22 Sep 2013 15:16:25 +0000

Hey, that’s a cute and engaging excerpt today! Thanks for sharing this particular bit with us.

By: veronicascott

veronicascott — Sun, 22 Sep 2013 14:14:50 +0000

Interesting how well the knight understands children. Great snippet!

By: Teresa Cypher (@Teresa_Cypher)

Teresa Cypher (@Teresa_Cypher) — Sun, 22 Sep 2013 13:33:34 +0000

“…as if to say, “You’ll do.” Intriguing, Danielle. Your writing is very fluid, very natural. Good 8! 🙂