Comments on: WeWriWa/Snippet Sunday 10/27/2013 #8sunday #snippetsunday https://www.theeternalscribe.com/wewriwasnippet-sunday-10272013-8sunday-snippetsunday/ Everyone Deserves a Happy Ending Mon, 28 Oct 2013 04:11:17 +0000 hourly 1 https://wordpress.org/?v=6.8.2 By: caitlinstern https://www.theeternalscribe.com/wewriwasnippet-sunday-10272013-8sunday-snippetsunday/#comment-348 Mon, 28 Oct 2013 04:11:17 +0000 http://theeternalscribe.com/?p=615#comment-348 If you’re hungry, I’m sure even hard bread is dang tasty.

Just a thought–all that description of its taste makes me wonder what it looks like, color, texture, etc. Unless it’s in another snippet.

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By: Sarah Cass https://www.theeternalscribe.com/wewriwasnippet-sunday-10272013-8sunday-snippetsunday/#comment-347 Sun, 27 Oct 2013 23:50:39 +0000 http://theeternalscribe.com/?p=615#comment-347 I can imagine how good it must feel to eat even a hardened loaf after such a time! I can’t wait to learn more of this knight.

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By: veronicascott https://www.theeternalscribe.com/wewriwasnippet-sunday-10272013-8sunday-snippetsunday/#comment-346 Sun, 27 Oct 2013 20:00:20 +0000 http://theeternalscribe.com/?p=615#comment-346 Enjoying the story, want to know more about the knight! and the lady. and, well, everything! Very intriguing. Minor nit – “even hard as they were they were worlds better…” What’s the “they”? I was visualizing a loaf of bread, which you did say… But it certainly didn’t impair my enjoyment of the scene!

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By: Linda Hamonou https://www.theeternalscribe.com/wewriwasnippet-sunday-10272013-8sunday-snippetsunday/#comment-345 Sun, 27 Oct 2013 16:52:01 +0000 http://theeternalscribe.com/?p=615#comment-345 This must be such a nice feeling, nice description.

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By: Emma Jean hoffmann https://www.theeternalscribe.com/wewriwasnippet-sunday-10272013-8sunday-snippetsunday/#comment-344 Sun, 27 Oct 2013 14:40:52 +0000 http://theeternalscribe.com/?p=615#comment-344 A fine 8! Though not a loaf, I want to eat.

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