Comments on: WeWriWa/Snippet Sunday 12/15/2013 #8sunday #snippetsunday

By: Skye Callahan

Skye Callahan — Tue, 17 Dec 2013 04:43:30 +0000

It has been a while since I’ve been able to stop by, but I love your snippets! Good description but it leaves me wanting more. 🙂

By: Kate Warren

Kate Warren — Tue, 17 Dec 2013 04:35:56 +0000

Nice eight!

By: Charley Descoteaux

Charley Descoteaux — Mon, 16 Dec 2013 00:08:29 +0000

Nice snippet–love the descriptions through his eyes.

Hope you feel better by the end of your marathon! 🙂

By: Elaine Cantrell

Elaine Cantrell — Sun, 15 Dec 2013 21:39:30 +0000

The Knight is observant to notice this.

By: sueannbowlingauthor

sueannbowlingauthor — Sun, 15 Dec 2013 20:37:43 +0000

I drift off to sleep between the top and the bottom of the page!. I’d like to know her past, too.

By: P.T. Wyant

P.T. Wyant — Sun, 15 Dec 2013 18:34:35 +0000

I usually only ever had that reading issue with text books.

I love the part about the vulnerability of sleep. (And I love this story.)

By: Steven Montano (@Daezarkian)

Steven Montano (@Daezarkian) — Sun, 15 Dec 2013 16:49:00 +0000

Love the details, and great character/tension building. Nice work!

By: Author Charmaine Gordon

Author Charmaine Gordon — Sun, 15 Dec 2013 16:23:18 +0000

Interesting observations about her protection of the child like an animal. Very intense eight.

By: veronicascott

veronicascott — Sun, 15 Dec 2013 15:40:32 +0000

This knight is really a good guy and so observant…I’m always eager to find out what happens next to this unlikely trio. Another excellent excerpt! (Now I’m thinking about a Terminator marathon – one of my favorite movies/series!)