Comments on: WeWriWa/Snippet Sunday 11/10/2013 #8sunday #snippetsunday https://www.theeternalscribe.com/648/ Everyone Deserves a Happy Ending Sun, 17 Nov 2013 13:09:04 +0000 hourly 1 https://wordpress.org/?v=6.8.2 By: FCEtier https://www.theeternalscribe.com/648/#comment-371 Sun, 17 Nov 2013 13:09:04 +0000 http://theeternalscribe.com/?p=648#comment-371 If readers find out what those two had been through, you’ve got a great story.
If we never find out exactly what they had been through…well…you’ve got an even better story.
Kudos!

]]> By: Linda Hamonou https://www.theeternalscribe.com/648/#comment-369 Mon, 11 Nov 2013 16:46:40 +0000 http://theeternalscribe.com/?p=648#comment-369 She must have been very tired or she must be trusting him. I could feel her nerves break down.

]]> By: Chelle Cordero https://www.theeternalscribe.com/648/#comment-368 Mon, 11 Nov 2013 07:33:30 +0000 http://theeternalscribe.com/?p=648#comment-368 There is almost an innocence in Sir Lionel the way he can’t understand what these two have been through. Shows a nice sensitivity.

]]> By: Gemma Parkes https://www.theeternalscribe.com/648/#comment-367 Sun, 10 Nov 2013 21:52:48 +0000 http://theeternalscribe.com/?p=648#comment-367 Poor things, I expect their misfortunes will come to light. Great snippet.

]]> By: Elaine Cantrell https://www.theeternalscribe.com/648/#comment-366 Sun, 10 Nov 2013 20:35:42 +0000 http://theeternalscribe.com/?p=648#comment-366 I like Sir Lionel too.

]]> By: sueannbowlingauthor https://www.theeternalscribe.com/648/#comment-365 Sun, 10 Nov 2013 19:54:03 +0000 http://theeternalscribe.com/?p=648#comment-365 Sir Lionel appears to be a true knight.

]]> By: veronicascott https://www.theeternalscribe.com/648/#comment-364 Sun, 10 Nov 2013 19:03:37 +0000 http://theeternalscribe.com/?p=648#comment-364 I very much like sir Lionel and can’t wait to see more of the story unfold. Great snippet!

]]> By: forrestdl@gmail.com https://www.theeternalscribe.com/648/#comment-363 Sun, 10 Nov 2013 17:20:18 +0000 http://theeternalscribe.com/?p=648#comment-363 In reply to P.T. Wyant.

I feel like I’ve betrayed you guys when I end up missing a week!

]]> By: Dawn Marie Hamilton https://www.theeternalscribe.com/648/#comment-362 Sun, 10 Nov 2013 17:07:44 +0000 http://theeternalscribe.com/?p=648#comment-362 “What had these two been through?” That’s what I want to know. Enjoyed your excerpt.

]]> By: Millie Burns https://www.theeternalscribe.com/648/#comment-361 Sun, 10 Nov 2013 15:57:25 +0000 http://theeternalscribe.com/?p=648#comment-361 Sir Lionel is fantastic. And David is adorable. It seems the two are safe for now…but I wonder what will befall them as a trio. Nice to see you back.

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