Comments on: WeWriWa/Snippet Sunday 01/19/2014 #8sunday #snippetsunday https://www.theeternalscribe.com/wewriwasnippet-sunday-01192014-8sunday-snippetsunday/ Everyone Deserves a Happy Ending Wed, 22 Jan 2014 19:08:00 +0000 hourly 1 https://wordpress.org/?v=6.9 By: Danielle Forrest https://www.theeternalscribe.com/wewriwasnippet-sunday-01192014-8sunday-snippetsunday/#comment-451 Wed, 22 Jan 2014 19:08:00 +0000 http://theeternalscribe.com/?p=853#comment-451 In reply to sueannbowlingauthor.

Yes, he was a captive too. She saved him! And thank you for pointing out the typo. It’s been corrected in the manuscript.

]]> By: Danielle Forrest https://www.theeternalscribe.com/wewriwasnippet-sunday-01192014-8sunday-snippetsunday/#comment-450 Wed, 22 Jan 2014 19:06:31 +0000 http://theeternalscribe.com/?p=853#comment-450 In reply to Gemma Parkes.

Thanks and really? I keep thinking I need to make a better one. I haven’t been happy with it. It doesn’t quite pop the way I want it to.

]]> By: sueannbowlingauthor https://www.theeternalscribe.com/wewriwasnippet-sunday-01192014-8sunday-snippetsunday/#comment-449 Mon, 20 Jan 2014 05:01:00 +0000 http://theeternalscribe.com/?p=853#comment-449 So David was a captive of the witch, too? (BTW, I think the last sentence would read better if you change dragged to dragging.)

]]> By: veronicascott https://www.theeternalscribe.com/wewriwasnippet-sunday-01192014-8sunday-snippetsunday/#comment-448 Sun, 19 Jan 2014 20:28:59 +0000 http://theeternalscribe.com/?p=853#comment-448 Enjoying the story as always, missed having a glimpse of the knight this week! Great snippet!

]]> By: Gemma Parkes https://www.theeternalscribe.com/wewriwasnippet-sunday-01192014-8sunday-snippetsunday/#comment-447 Sun, 19 Jan 2014 13:58:13 +0000 http://theeternalscribe.com/?p=853#comment-447 I like your description of the city, very visual. What a beautiful cover this has too!

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