Comments on: WeWriWa/Snippet Sunday 08/04/2013 #8sunday #snipsun https://www.theeternalscribe.com/wewriwasnippet-sunday-08042013-8sunday-snipsun/ Everyone Deserves a Happy Ending Thu, 08 Aug 2013 03:33:00 +0000 hourly 1 https://wordpress.org/?v=6.8.2 By: forrestdl@gmail.com https://www.theeternalscribe.com/wewriwasnippet-sunday-08042013-8sunday-snipsun/#comment-180 Thu, 08 Aug 2013 03:33:00 +0000 http://theeternalscribe.com/?p=376#comment-180 In reply to sharonbuchbinder.

Well, I was never physically abused, but I’ve known people who were, both physically and sexually. Abuse is a terrible thing. But I think what’s probably the most tragic is the type that gets completely ignored. People shout out about physical and sexual abuse, but ignore verbal abuse entirely. It can shred a child’s psyche without a bruise to speak evidence of it. It can do so much more damage, and yet no one cares. Have you seen what happens to people with that type of background? It isn’t their bones that get broken, but their minds.

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By: Cindy Amrhein https://www.theeternalscribe.com/wewriwasnippet-sunday-08042013-8sunday-snipsun/#comment-179 Wed, 07 Aug 2013 22:28:31 +0000 http://theeternalscribe.com/?p=376#comment-179 It is very good. I’m curious too as to why she took them, but there are a lot of nuts in this world. Look how many take children in real life?

History Sleuth’s Milk Carton Murders

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By: sharonbuchbinder https://www.theeternalscribe.com/wewriwasnippet-sunday-08042013-8sunday-snipsun/#comment-178 Wed, 07 Aug 2013 21:18:25 +0000 http://theeternalscribe.com/?p=376#comment-178 Forrest–you have touched a nerve with me. Child abuse, neglect, starvation…these are all in my background. And you have shown the reader the cruelties through the eyes of the victim. Well done.

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By: forrestdl@gmail.com https://www.theeternalscribe.com/wewriwasnippet-sunday-08042013-8sunday-snipsun/#comment-173 Sun, 04 Aug 2013 21:38:50 +0000 http://theeternalscribe.com/?p=376#comment-173 In reply to Linda Morris.

And I love writing characters with flaws. Maybe a little too much, really. I have another story in the works where the MC has PTSD and was sexually abused as a child. In yet another, she was neglected as a child, and tried to commit suicide by walking in front of an SUV…

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By: Linda Morris https://www.theeternalscribe.com/wewriwasnippet-sunday-08042013-8sunday-snipsun/#comment-172 Sun, 04 Aug 2013 21:15:49 +0000 http://theeternalscribe.com/?p=376#comment-172 I do love a story where the main characters suffer horrible torments. It must be the Jane Eyre lover in me. Nice job!

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By: willablair https://www.theeternalscribe.com/wewriwasnippet-sunday-08042013-8sunday-snipsun/#comment-171 Sun, 04 Aug 2013 19:56:49 +0000 http://theeternalscribe.com/?p=376#comment-171 Great description. She has a lot to be worried about.

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By: forrestdl@gmail.com https://www.theeternalscribe.com/wewriwasnippet-sunday-08042013-8sunday-snipsun/#comment-170 Sun, 04 Aug 2013 19:55:21 +0000 http://theeternalscribe.com/?p=376#comment-170 In reply to veronicascott.

I’m a sucker for details. In fact, I have been known to goof off by researching. Once, I spent a ridiculous amount of time on WedMD reading patient comments on the side effects of Haldol. I found it annoying that all the sites I went to listed all the side effects possible, but nobody’s going to get all the side effects.

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By: veronicascott https://www.theeternalscribe.com/wewriwasnippet-sunday-08042013-8sunday-snipsun/#comment-169 Sun, 04 Aug 2013 19:46:46 +0000 http://theeternalscribe.com/?p=376#comment-169 I loved the way you thought out all the details, glad they’re escaping! Excellent excerpt!

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By: raynegolay https://www.theeternalscribe.com/wewriwasnippet-sunday-08042013-8sunday-snipsun/#comment-168 Sun, 04 Aug 2013 19:19:38 +0000 http://theeternalscribe.com/?p=376#comment-168 Wonderful description. I’m curious to know why they’re being held captive.

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By: forrestdl@gmail.com https://www.theeternalscribe.com/wewriwasnippet-sunday-08042013-8sunday-snipsun/#comment-167 Sun, 04 Aug 2013 18:40:50 +0000 http://theeternalscribe.com/?p=376#comment-167 In reply to P.T. Wyant.

Thanks. That was my master plan. Mwahahaha!

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