Set’s the heart racing. Exactly what I was going for. Excellent.

Danke, danke.

Thanks for the note. I’ll make a note of that in the document on my computer.

Well, that’s the plan. Always good to know it’s working.

Glad you liked it!

Oh, you’ll just have to wait and find out. Mwahahaha!

Well, my sense of smell sucks, so I have a tendency to overcompensate with my description of other senses. See, I never describe smells, largely because I would have no idea how. Still, just the right amount of description can do wonders, don’t you think? I always try to throw in a few scenes in a books that elicit physical or emotional responses from the readers.