Comments on: WeWriWa/Snippet Sunday 08/25/2013 #8sunday #snippetsunday

By: forrestdl@gmail.com

forrestdl@gmail.com — Mon, 02 Sep 2013 21:47:13 +0000

In reply to P.T. Wyant. Well, I've certainly been there before. I mean, not running for my life or hiding from people in the woods like that, but fear, adrenaline, fatigue. Been there.

By: forrestdl@gmail.com

forrestdl@gmail.com — Mon, 02 Sep 2013 21:45:59 +0000

In reply to sharonbuchbinder. Heroine. I hadn't really thought of her as a heroine. But I like writing people who are damaged, and I always think of heroes as perfect.

By: forrestdl@gmail.com

forrestdl@gmail.com — Mon, 02 Sep 2013 21:44:40 +0000

In reply to Susan Schiller. Thanks, and glad to hear you rooting for her. Glad to know I've really hit this first part of the book real solid.

By: forrestdl@gmail.com

forrestdl@gmail.com — Mon, 02 Sep 2013 21:43:41 +0000

In reply to sarahballance. Thanks. I love writing intense stuff. I can't do sappy, so...

By: Gem Sivad

Gem Sivad — Sun, 01 Sep 2013 11:20:03 +0000

Determination tinged with real panic and fear. I felt all three. Great job!

By: P.T. Wyant

P.T. Wyant — Mon, 26 Aug 2013 17:35:10 +0000

Excellent description of her body’s physical reaction to the exertion and fear.

By: Linda Hamonou

Linda Hamonou — Mon, 26 Aug 2013 03:47:04 +0000

He won’t find them. They will be ok, because she didn’t give up yet.

By: veronicascott

veronicascott — Sun, 25 Aug 2013 19:46:38 +0000

I like her sheer determination, which comes through clearly in the excerpt. Terrific snippet!

By: raynegolay

raynegolay — Sun, 25 Aug 2013 19:14:03 +0000

A woman on a mission with a clear purpose. God snippet.

By: sharonbuchbinder

sharonbuchbinder — Sun, 25 Aug 2013 17:49:24 +0000

This gal epitomizes HEROINE. Gr8t!!