Comments on: WeWriWa/Snippet Sunday 09/01/2013 #8sunday #snippetsunday https://www.theeternalscribe.com/wewriwasnippet-sunday-09012013-8sunday-snippetsunday/ Everyone Deserves a Happy Ending Tue, 03 Sep 2013 14:19:35 +0000 hourly 1 https://wordpress.org/?v=6.8.2 By: Linda Hamonou (@crazypuce) https://www.theeternalscribe.com/wewriwasnippet-sunday-09012013-8sunday-snippetsunday/#comment-234 Tue, 03 Sep 2013 14:19:35 +0000 http://theeternalscribe.com/?p=436#comment-234 Ah I knew he wasn’t a bad guy… at least I hope he didn’t lie here.

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By: forrestdl@gmail.com https://www.theeternalscribe.com/wewriwasnippet-sunday-09012013-8sunday-snippetsunday/#comment-233 Mon, 02 Sep 2013 21:54:52 +0000 http://theeternalscribe.com/?p=436#comment-233 In reply to burnsmillie.

You’ll just have to wait and find out.

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By: forrestdl@gmail.com https://www.theeternalscribe.com/wewriwasnippet-sunday-09012013-8sunday-snippetsunday/#comment-232 Mon, 02 Sep 2013 21:54:21 +0000 http://theeternalscribe.com/?p=436#comment-232 In reply to P.T. Wyant.

There was a scene change which didn’t get included since it was between this week’s snippet and last. Sorry for the confusion. It didn’t occur to me that people would notice with seven days between. Again, sorry.

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By: forrestdl@gmail.com https://www.theeternalscribe.com/wewriwasnippet-sunday-09012013-8sunday-snippetsunday/#comment-231 Mon, 02 Sep 2013 21:53:03 +0000 http://theeternalscribe.com/?p=436#comment-231 In reply to Feather Stone.

Your comment has been noted in the manuscript. Thanks. Knowing me, I’ll probably end up completely rewording the entire thing. I’ve certainly done it before…

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By: forrestdl@gmail.com https://www.theeternalscribe.com/wewriwasnippet-sunday-09012013-8sunday-snippetsunday/#comment-230 Mon, 02 Sep 2013 21:50:47 +0000 http://theeternalscribe.com/?p=436#comment-230 In reply to veronicascott.

And it could be it really isn’t clear. It’s a first draft, so there’s bound to be some odd spots. Thanks for the comment. I’ve added in a note in the manuscript to take a look at it later.

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By: forrestdl@gmail.com https://www.theeternalscribe.com/wewriwasnippet-sunday-09012013-8sunday-snippetsunday/#comment-229 Mon, 02 Sep 2013 21:49:13 +0000 http://theeternalscribe.com/?p=436#comment-229 In reply to Karen Michelle Nutt.

Well, tune in next week for…

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By: forrestdl@gmail.com https://www.theeternalscribe.com/wewriwasnippet-sunday-09012013-8sunday-snippetsunday/#comment-228 Mon, 02 Sep 2013 21:48:42 +0000 http://theeternalscribe.com/?p=436#comment-228 In reply to Teresa Cypher (@Teresa_Cypher).

Well, you know little boys. There’s no telling how they’re react. Some will cower in fear, clinging to their mothers’ skirts while others will go straight out and greet the danger as if it wasn’t even there.

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By: burnsmillie https://www.theeternalscribe.com/wewriwasnippet-sunday-09012013-8sunday-snippetsunday/#comment-223 Mon, 02 Sep 2013 04:03:26 +0000 http://theeternalscribe.com/?p=436#comment-223 I agree with PT, took me a minute to figure out the differing POV, but now that I have, glad he’s not as scary as I thought he’d be : ) At least, I think he’s not…

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By: P.T. Wyant https://www.theeternalscribe.com/wewriwasnippet-sunday-09012013-8sunday-snippetsunday/#comment-222 Sun, 01 Sep 2013 16:28:54 +0000 http://theeternalscribe.com/?p=436#comment-222 The POV change from the last snippet left me a bit confused, but that is most likely less abrupt in the actual book. I love David’s confidence, by the way.

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By: Feather Stone https://www.theeternalscribe.com/wewriwasnippet-sunday-09012013-8sunday-snippetsunday/#comment-221 Sun, 01 Sep 2013 16:00:33 +0000 http://theeternalscribe.com/?p=436#comment-221 Perhaps you can be more clear in the sentence “directed himself at the sob” and perhaps change to something like “directed himself toward the sob.” It is a very intriguing snippet. I look forward to following this story. Thank you.

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